quatrain 64
Sunlight offers four versions of quatrain #64, in addition to the Houshmand version discussed at rotting lips.
When I die, lay out the corpse.
You may want to kiss my lips,
just beginning to decay. Don't be frightened
if I open my eyes.
version by Coleman Barkswhen i die
hand me over
to my sweetheart
one kiss
on my dead lips
don't be surprised
if I come alive
translation by Nader KhaliliWhen I die,
lay my copse to rest,
but do not be at all surprised
If His kiss on my tattered lips
brings me back to life.
translation by Azima Melita Kolin and Maryam MafiIf I die, lay me next to the Beloved.
If He looks at me, don't be surprised.
If He kisses me on the lips, don't be surprised.
If I open my eyes and smile, don't be surprised.
version by Jonathan Star
Labels: Barks, Houshmand, Khalili, Kolin/Mafi, Star